秋日拨闷
疏烟点寒芜，落日低茅屋。
哭子泪未干，哭女声相续。
丧乱多忧虞，生死何荣辱。
独怜白发亲，无以娱心目。
小侄早茕茕，岁艰缺饘粥。
数椽燹火馀，郁攸忍相蹙。
余辜信有之，天韬亦云酷。
桂树万黄金，可玩不可蓄。
贫富非我能，出处谁从卜。
买臣非汉武，负薪终碌碌。
侧闻西山巅，薇蕨寒犹绿。
倚树画轩楹，愿依白云宿。
The light smoke dotted the cold wasteland, and the sun was setting low over the茅屋. The child's tears had not yet dried, and the woman's wailing continued. In times of loss and strife, life and death hold no sense of right or wrong. Only the elderly parents are pitied, who have nothing to comfort their hearts and eyes. The young nephew is alone and helpless, and in times of hardship, he lacks nourishing food. The few thatched huts left from the ravages of fire, are too small to bear the burden of sorrow. I am indeed guilty, and the heavens seem cruel. The osmanthus trees are laden with golden flowers, beautiful to behold but not to be stored. Whether rich or poor is not within my control, and who can predict where I will end up? Unlike Zhu Buyingchenc in the Han Dynasty who was eventually recognized by Emperor Wu Di and rose in status despite carrying firewood in public, I shall remain unremarkable without any official recognition or position. I have heard that on the peak of Western Hills, the brambles are still green in the cold weather. I lean on the tree, drawing a scene in my mind, and wish to rest in the peace of white clouds.
《秋日拨闷》这首诗，以其深沉的情感和细腻的笔触，勾勒出一幅秋日里家庭遭遇不幸，内心苦闷却寻求超脱的画卷。首句“疏烟点寒芜，落日低茅屋”，以秋日特有的景象开篇，疏淡的烟雾点缀着荒芜之地，落日余晖斜照在简陋的茅屋之上，营造出一种凄清而宁静的氛围，为全诗奠定了忧伤的基调。
接下来，“哭子泪未干，哭女声相续”，直接切入主题，展现了家中接连遭遇丧子之痛的惨状，泪水未干，哭声又起，情感真挚而深切，令人动容。这种直面人生苦难的描写，透露出诗人内心的悲痛与无奈。
“丧乱多忧虞，生死何荣辱”，诗人进一步反思战乱频仍、世事无常的时代背景，生死之间，荣辱皆空，流露出对生命本质的深刻思考和对现实社会的无奈感慨。
“独怜白发亲，无以娱心目”，笔触转向家中年迈的双亲，他们在丧子之痛中更显孤独无助，诗人内心充满了对父母的怜爱与自责，因为自己无法给予他们丝毫的安慰与快乐。
“小侄早茕茕，岁艰缺饘粥”，又添一层苦难，小侄儿孤苦无依，生活艰难，连基本温饱都难以保障，更添几分凄凉。
“数椽燹火馀，郁攸忍相蹙”，描述家园在战火中残破不堪，即便是残存的几间房屋，也似乎难以抵挡风雨的侵袭，象征着生活的重重困境。
“余辜信有之，天韬亦云酷”，诗人开始自我反省，或许认为自己有罪孽，以至于遭遇如此残酷的命运，表现出一种对命运的无奈接受与自我责备。
“桂树万黄金，可玩不可蓄”，以桂树之美比喻世事的美好但难以持久，隐含着对美好事物易逝的惋惜。
“贫富非我能，出处谁从卜”，诗人感叹贫富无常，人生出处难以预料，表达了对命运不可捉摸的无奈。
“买臣非汉武，负薪终碌碌”，借用历史典故，暗喻自己虽有才华却未遇明君，只能默默无闻，辛劳度日，流露出怀才不遇的感慨。
最后，“侧闻西山巅，薇蕨寒犹绿。倚树画轩楹，愿依白云宿。”诗人笔锋一转，转向对自然美景的向往，听说西山之巅薇蕨虽寒犹绿，心中萌生了隐居山林、依云而栖的愿望，透露出在乱世中寻求心灵慰藉，渴望超脱尘世烦恼的情感。
整首诗情感真挚，意境深远，既有对个人命运的悲叹，也有对自然美景的向往，展现了诗人在逆境中寻求精神解脱的心路历程。